Ashton John Fischer Jr. Comments (1)
Willa T Olivier
19 Mar 2005 05:03
Hello Ashton John Fischer Jr. I liked your poem, 'Fourteen Lines of Life.' I could see that you were playing around with the two meanings of the word, right, and thereby leading to some playing with the words left and wrong. You suggest mystery, and I couldn't tell whether you might have been referring to a one-time-only date, or a short affair, or some other relationship, not a romantic one. Perhaps you are teasing your readers. In any case, I enjoyed your poem. Willa TO.