A Bird In The Hand (A Song)
Woman, Oh Woman (A Song)
31 Aug 2005 09:19
A Hundred Thousand Men: Rating: Excellent This is a very creative and inspiring poem. I like meter and control, I can feel the passion in this poem, excellent piece! Rob A Hundred Thousand Men: Poetry Hound ( Regardless of whether we think the war was a mistake or the commander in chief misguided, we do need to show support for our troops, and you've done that well. A Hundred Thousand Men: Kelly Allen Vinal As oe of those, with dozens who work under me, I am honored by your tribute. I am humbled. Thank you, Mr. Simmons From Rob, USA: I like your style of writing. Your poetry appears to be pure and inspiring. I love the smooth flow of it. And the spiritual message is very gripping. God bless- Rob From Toronto Canada: you must have an interesting life. i like the poem about the tv star. thanks -donnie A Pale Horse: Ivy Schexnayder It is a very beautiful poem. I wonder though, what inspired you? I would love to know. Beyond Those Mountains: Kelly Allen Vinal Generally well-written. Much promise in this writer Bugs Rock N Roll: Joyce Lazarus what an absolutely delightful poem! thanks, Joyce Bugs Rock N Roll: CJ Heck Hello Bill, Adorable poem. I especially love the surprise ending! Warmest regards, CJ Cloudy Day: .. Kinda like writing that person's initials in mustard on a sandwich...then the whole name. *big mistake! it's nasty ;) * Cowboys Day: Samantha Garrett Very good I really liked how you introduced that hes a cowboy at the end however it may be a little bit more effective if you placed the first line as the title. It would leave a bit of mystery for the reader and then it ties it all together at the end when you say 'he is a cowboy after all'. I am just suggesting things, I really do think its good though. For A Day: CJ Heck Hello Bill, (Clapping) Excellent poem. You have a nice way of writing for the child in us all. Warmest regards, CJ Freedom: Jeanfrancois Denis Powerful write Bill! We should all be thankful for the men who died for freedom. There are too many men trying to steal it from peoples out there. Excellent! ~JD~ John Laraquette: Lamont Palmer Sweet poem. All through my teens and 20's I was an amateur actor, doing lots of community theatre. I was always starstruck and I remember how excited I became when I bumped into John Travolta in an outdoor cafe in Washington DC one night. This poem captures that experience nicely. Me And The Lonely: dissatified exmember (1/30/2005 1: 32: 00 PM) Loneliness is a state of mind. We are actually never really alone. So many share the same feelings, that we are in fact part of a huge network of people. Just imagine all those thousands of friends just sitting there filling the airwaves with the same omotion. hehehehe hey I'd be looking for some quiet time. Nice Poem Bill. Jan Mean Senorita: .. This is actually pretty funny...i like it. Kinda ironic cause some people think i'm a mean senorita. =) My Wife: Alex L Black This is such a lovely poem! One Candle: Kelly Allen Vinal As it burns, very well done. One Dream: .. I think everyone can relate to this poem. Very clear image...I can see (you) staring at the ceiling with your arms folded across (your) chest. Been there...done that... =) Soldier Coming Home: Kelly Allen Vinal As a soldier, I can relate to this fine lyric. Nicely done
31 Jul 2005 10:00
Comments about authors work: Remember Me: Rating: Excellent wow, this is an absolutely touching poem! i have a friend who was killed in this war, and i know he'd have loved this poem. i don't see many poems about the military, and this just touched me in a way i can't explain. thank you, god bless you, and keep writing! ! Blowing in The Breeze: Rating: Excellent Beautiful, and so true! ! ! ! ..Joy Remember Me: Rating: Excellent Nicely done Silver Streams....BillWilliamStar: Rating: Excellent Good poem Soldier Coming Home: Rating: Excellent Wonderful sentiment and emotion shown in your poem... Hope all is going well for you A Heart's Lie: Rating: Excellent very good Mean Senorita..(Humor) ..BillWilliamStar: Rating: Excellent Glad you took the leap of faith after all these years. I just shared this poem with my husband. After he stopped laughing he wanted to extend his sympathy! He claims to understand your plight! : D keep 'em comin'! The Mermaid: Rating: Excellent A BEAUTIFUL Poem! ! The Tin Heart..........(BillWilliamStar: Rating: Excellent I absolutely loved this one! I could feel your pain like a river running thru it. Excellent rhyming verse. Lonesome And I..........(BillWilliamStar) : Rating: Excellent I really like this Bill. It sounds like a good candidate for a song..ever considered that? I Never Will (True Story) : Rating: Excellent THIS IS SO DEEP AND REAL. I WAS TOUCHED WITH SUCH EMOTIONS Before There Was You: Rating: Excellent THE REALIZATION OF MANY The Husband And Wife (A Song) : Rating: Excellent Loved this it used to be the way it was about love The Trojan Heart: Rating: Excellent Love this piece of writing very well worded indeed! .. Thank you Woman's Heart: An excellent write with good imagey. Keep up the good work The Leprechaun Tree (A childrens Book) : nice one but too long Once upon A Time: Once upon a time, to me, seems like such a long time ago. In Your Shadow: good work Let Me Know (A Song) : LOL> wow. let me tell you it made me think of my bestfriend who betrayed my trust. its something i would give to her. excellenct job! The Pig And The Turkey (A Story, Humor) : Laughed my ###! off. Hope I can say that! My Wife: Beautiful and inspiring. Another wonderful write. Keep it up! The Mermaid: Loved it I could imagine her in her watery wonderland. Great job Once upon A Time: Rating: Excellent this brought tears to my eyes keep up the good work i will surely keep reading The Devil: The devil ain't such a bad guy if you're like me and don't believe in an actual devil, just devilish people. Soft As Rose Petals: Such a sweet poem, I get the image of pink rose petals in my head when I read this. For A Day: This is a nice lil poem. Good. For A Day: cute! Lonesome Heart: nice write Have you Wondered: Rating: Excellent A CHERISHASBLE ONE The Easter Bunny: Rating: Excellent THIS POEM IS SO VERY CUTE: *) I Never Will (True Story) : Rating: Excellent TIGHT Clear Still Night: Rating: Excellent ANOTHER GOOD ONE I Do Wonder: Rating: Excellent BEAUTIFUL IT MADE ME CRY TEARS OF JOY: *) Zorro (A Story) : Awwwwww, Great write...Written so well.. Be blessed, Betty The Mermaid: cool poem Here I am again: You're such a romantic in your writes. Great job Lonesome Heart: very meaningful and creative write. Thanks for sharing your talent Zorro (A Story) : After reading this story It has come to mind I have been on your site because this story is familiar because I read this before. and you know I will read more you were one of many excellent writers on the site Soft As Rose Petals: Wonderful well expressed write. This have so much meaning and perception from each source one being you. very descriptive and enjoyable write.Your introduction was so lively I could feel it.smile The Ugly Tree: Excellent. Great write. I love this poem. I need to let my granddaughter see it. Ice On the Water: very nicely written, thanks for sharing. Soldier Coming Home: wow, very nice. I like this poem a lot The Easter Bunny: Rating: Excellent very good The Old Farmer: Bill, That is so beautiful! You have such beautiful words that comes from your heart! Thanks for sharing them with all of us. The Pig And The Turkey: (A Story, Humor) : Rating: Excellent Bill, Excellent poem! ; -) That is well written and funny! ; -) It reminds me when I was growing up in Maine and our big pig got loose and chased me and my sister up on top of the out house! Boy did he do some damamge in the potato fields, and our pride! ; -) Keep writing, I have just begun to read! ; -) Love, Life, Laughter and Peace Deception Of The Heart: Can I relate to this poem! :) We do share a similarity in writing. Great write... Hawian Blue Skies: Rating: Excellent Aloha from Hawaii! You have captured what its like to be lonely in paradise... Notes to the Author: From: Northern Ireland, I stumbled across your site tonight and i'm glad i did. its the best site i have seen so far, the work is so fresh and fun and some of it is also deep and sincere.100% brilliant. From: Florence, USA, I Have A Dream And I like your writes too Bill keep up the great work too. From: Australia, Hi There you write so well. Very impressive! The important thing is you are doing what you enjoy! From: Honolulu, USA, I've enjoyed your site and look forward to reading more... You are very talented! Keep up the good work :) From: A Student, Dear Mr. Star My name is **** ***** I'm 16 years old and I'm a student of Laramie Senior High School. For our poetry class we were asked to find a poem memorize it and give a presentation on the author of your poem. That's when i came across your poem entitled 'The Alamo' I instantly knew that this was the poem i wanted to do. I then had to find some backround on the author, and i looked for you but i couldn't find enough so i was wandering if before this monday May 2 if you coud send me an e mail that contains your life story for the class. Thanks for your time
30 Jan 2005 01:38
Bill you are very much the song writer. It comes through in your work. Have you made a CD?