Amateur songwriter, singer, guitar player. Professional Diesel Technician
I joined this site in hopes of recieving some outside opinions on my lyrics, so if anyone has time I would love some feedback.
Our bread we live, our bed we sleep
Making love and I become you
Flesh is warm with naked feet
stabbing thorns and you become me... more »
I should just go home, its only going to get tougher,
but every heart destroying moment makes me stay another.
Couldn't you just reject me like all the others,... more »
I hear you say that you're not feeling good - I don't care.
'Cause I don't either. I told you so. You should've drank some water.
You would've felt better.... more »