Justin Le Comments (1)

Before you start commenting on other people's poetry, I would suggest doing a bit more reading. Your 'style' borders on classic poetry mixed with modern-day angst poems. This is to be expected, I suppose; you're young and you have to start somewhere. But without the proper knowlege of the many, many formats of poetry, you cannot possibly leave me or anyone else an honest, thoughtful critique. Read more modern poetry as it is a bit easier to grasp. Explore and expand.