Im 17 about to be 18 years old. i always want to publish my work online. Im shy and dont speak well with my voice but with my written words. Im still in high school about to be senior next year. I want everyone to see what i can do. I have a wonderful boyfriend who will support me in anything i do.

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Katherine Patrick Poems

Dark Days

Where the light in my world?
Am I blind to it?
I want to be happy like everyone else i see
But all i have is this fake smile... more »

Monster

Maybe its living inside of me?
Or am I dreaming of all of the lies?
Nomore hiding the thing that inside of me
Sorry but I cant change who I am... more »

Tears

Why am I crying for you?
You dont even see me anymore...
I disappear from your veiw
Why do you hate me so?... more »

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Comments about Katherine Patrick

Shaun York 29 Dec 2013 08:05
I'm not sure exactly how I feel about the pom but the idea seems very strong. This is completely my opinion, but it might be better if the emotion behind the poem was exposed more by changing up the spacing and format of the poem as well as changing the pace using long and short words for the rhythm you want.