MS (8.4.1929 / Marton, Lancashire)

0016 Immortalised - A Not Quaiku

The almond petals
fall as slow as snowflakes
hoping that a poet passes.

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Tranquility, comes to mind, here...peaceful surrender perhaps, as well....a very solid Mai'KU...; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; FRANK
Hi, Michael. i really like the simple beauty of this. it is immortal.