JK ( / Crawley)

005. A Volcano Erupts

The lonely darkness
swallows up the light of day
nothing is left of the light
but a thin pin prick

The pin prick opens
the dark is lit up
a fire burns bright
the flames reach up
with burning hands

Three silver rings
thick and thin
a circle of gold
bubble in the fire

As gold liquid flows
the thunder is heard
as grey light is lit up
from the volcano

by Jaden Knight

Comments (3)

Poetry Eruption lesson? appropriate. never leave home without a notebook, or a writing stick. bri :)
Nice one...............
The description is really quite vivid. I loved how it gave me a vibe of the essence of Lord Of the Rings.