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005. A Volcano Erupts
JK ( / Crawley)

005. A Volcano Erupts

The lonely darkness
swallows up the light of day
nothing is left of the light
but a thin pin prick

The pin prick opens
the dark is lit up
a fire burns bright
the flames reach up
with burning hands

Three silver rings
thick and thin
a circle of gold
bubble in the fire

As gold liquid flows
the thunder is heard
as grey light is lit up
from the volcano

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Comments (3)

Poetry Eruption lesson? appropriate. never leave home without a notebook, or a writing stick. bri :)
Nice one...............
The description is really quite vivid. I loved how it gave me a vibe of the essence of Lord Of the Rings.