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(005) Revelation: Brooklyn Bridge (Cinquain)
LO Leeanndra O'Lear (Aquarius / USA)

(005) Revelation: Brooklyn Bridge (Cinquain)

Within
the solid steel -
a giant, thumping heart.
This sturdy Brooklyn overpass
has soul.

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Comments (2)

good use of the form. i could hear the traffic's thump.
i love to sit under the brooklyn bridge & get frightened out of my wits by the train that rumbles right over your head - there's an awesome little public park right by the river where you can see a painter on any numbered day. good write, Lee, its nice to see someone use different styles on here.