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0053 More Heartstone Than Headstone
MS (8.4.1929 / Marton, Lancashire)

0053 More Heartstone Than Headstone

Here lies the grave
of the very, very brave -
pray mark it with a song

who died defending
the arguably right
from the army of the
arguably wrong.

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Comments (5)

It's so so true. cemeteries are full of very brave's tombs.
Michael, perfect use of the word 'arguably.' You make a valid point... well done! ! Brian
This is incredible work. The language use is perfect. Nicely done.
What nobler cause could there be for improving the rhymes in your poetry? Nice one Michael.
Nicely said! ! ! ! !