02-23-05

I’ve extracted you
from my body
like a sliver-

by Amberlee Carter Click to read full poem

Comments (8)

I don't know how anyone can describe your poetry as 'good'. Another powerful work. I'm new to Poemhunter so I'm looking forward to more.
It's wonderful, perfect.
I wonder if humans make themselves lonely by creating and believing in love? A good poem.
fabulous. and great ending too.
Yikes, that last line was not what I wanted to hear from anybody.
If some poems (and people) are slivers, this is the whole tree. H
i especially like the very first line. people almost embed themselves into you, don't they? powerful, moving, touching. Jake
As usual powerful imagery, and some haunting alliteration. Very memorable.