MS (8.4.1929 / Marton, Lancashire)

Oh, The Magical Daisy! (Tanka)

Petals graced with dew
demure in simplicity,
sprightly fiery hues
catching one's sight perfectly,
Oh, the magical daisy!

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'love' as in 'love'.... I prefer the seduction...or the mindblowing implosion....but you're right....maybe we'd write better if we cared more about whom is reading our work....Nice one.