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(1) Celestial Visitor - Photographic Impression

(1) Celestial Visitor - Photographic Impression

…..I …..

Spearing darkness
An eye blinked flash
Celestial aberration
Dribbling droplets of fire

…..II…..

Celestial javelin
Slicing the night
Showering shards
Of iridescent light

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Comments (8)

Likewise.. inspirational! ! ! I see Mecurial energy in that javelin...
Here 'figures of speech' wonder about their own innovativeness This Cosmic eccentricity has glistened our intellect and helped man to step on moon… The way you have brought about the visual effects of night …spearing darkness…slicing Amazing phrases emitting affective responses….creative and impressive…
And an awesome impression it is! You have described a cosmic event with pure elegance, and unearthly brilliance. Simply wonderful! Linda :)
This poem makes me want to go outside and stair into the night sky, you show things that I cannot see, but you make me want to see them.
rich imagination which only poets like you can pictorise; great poem
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