#1 (From, Picture Poems 1)

a singing man
was sacrificed

by ravens
of night dreams

my silky soft desire
is lying

and denied a wish

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Comments (4)

A simple piece with a simple thought. Thanks for sharing such intresting work.
The ravens drive this poem and its quirkiness makes it alive...word master regards
‘and denied a wish’ bottom line of poem climaxed here with a dash of abstractism Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
So elusive and suggestive. very good technique enjoyed thanks