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(1) Lightening

(1) Lightening

Pencilling its way
Across an indigo sky,
Spider web lacerations,
Paint the earth

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Comments (4)

Your words etch the image of your subject into the reader's mind and leave her thinking: 'I wish I'd said that'. Articulate, graceful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Induced a strong visual of forked lightning displaying its power
i almost saw it...i mean the lightning painting the earth!
marvellous play on worlds pencilling the very word of earthly man woman reproductivity and birth of a crying poem...10 on target leonard