(1) Ode To Immortality

Jetting creative fire
Through a diamond eye
Sculpting hair-like ripples
On an emerald sky

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A sparkling rhyming couplet that captures the universal creative spirit in four magical lines. A precious jewel of a poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
A lovely image Mr. Daranjo very nice.
Delightful imagery Leonard, thank you...
Your couplets are perfectly in tune. You have a way with words. Warm regards, Sandra
immortalised for ever..sheer serendipity