10 Steps To Heaven

Poem By Edward Kofi Louis

10 steps to heaven are like the '10 Commandments'!
But look around and see the truth;
Are we really keeping the laws? ! !
Then, we need to rethink to follow these steps.

Comments about 10 Steps To Heaven

We need righteous laws to lead us! ! ! Obeying them! ! ! ! For the peace of the world. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.
We have to redefine laws, Edward A poet like you can do
Are we really keeping the laws? ! ! .....a great question to our present society with an outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem.
Honestly introspective. A truth bearing write. Thanks for sharing this piece Edward 10+
Steps of peace and love! ! Muse of righteous laws. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.


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