23 Fitzroy Road , In The Middle
by a pregnant thought,
CEMETERIES, in a
by DAVID GERARDINO
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07 Jul 2008 10:18
Amen Amen. I like it. Good piece.
14 Apr 2007 10:38
Excellent poem, I love abstract poetry---Melvina---
14 Dec 2006 11:43
Wow, this is powerful. Concise, as you've noted, with a lot of force. Sort of Robert Creeley meets Emily Dickinson, with a contemporary attitude. Gotta' check out more of your stuff. CM
26 Nov 2006 01:04
Great poem. Drugs can and may cause death and an entryway into a nuthouse of craziness. An easy ten given here. God bless all poets-MJG.
06 Jul 2006 07:40
Hi David, I like this poem, it was unique and very different. It sounded kind of sad. You write with good expression and emotion. This one is different from your other poems. It was still good. Take care.
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
02 Jun 2006 04:26
SOUNDS LIKE YOU MIGHT HAV' AN OCASSIONAL YEN FIR SOME ''KING CRIMSON TUNES...AWESOME METAPHORIC STATEMENT' 'CEMETERIES IN A MENTAL HOSPITAL...ABSTRACTLY REFINE...10, ONCE AGHAIN, DAVID ''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
20 May 2006 02:47
Lots happening in few words... I feel that: o)