23 Fitzroy Road , In The Middle

LUST, restoration,
weight, exhausted,
by a pregnant thought,
CEMETERIES, in a

by DAVID GERARDINO Click to read full poem

Comments (7)

Amen Amen. I like it. Good piece.
Excellent poem, I love abstract poetry---Melvina---
Wow, this is powerful. Concise, as you've noted, with a lot of force. Sort of Robert Creeley meets Emily Dickinson, with a contemporary attitude. Gotta' check out more of your stuff. CM
Great poem. Drugs can and may cause death and an entryway into a nuthouse of craziness. An easy ten given here. God bless all poets-MJG.
Hi David, I like this poem, it was unique and very different. It sounded kind of sad. You write with good expression and emotion. This one is different from your other poems. It was still good. Take care.
SOUNDS LIKE YOU MIGHT HAV' AN OCASSIONAL YEN FIR SOME ''KING CRIMSON TUNES...AWESOME METAPHORIC STATEMENT' 'CEMETERIES IN A MENTAL HOSPITAL...ABSTRACTLY REFINE...10, ONCE AGHAIN, DAVID ''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
Lots happening in few words... I feel that: o)