500 Words And One Hand

'Yes', she uttered.
It was 1966, home turf,
when standing, tipsy
on the muddy banks

by Herbert Nehrlich Click to read full poem

Comments (9)

amazing and very abstract
impressive way of relating
Indeed a very deep write. Last line keeps the extract of whole.
This is very touching......and sensual. alana
A very wanting poem KK
Interesting Herbert...but a lot of memories.......
There seems to be so much of wanting, piled up inside.
Wonderful memmories so I never looked for greener grass I had it lock stock and barrell. Fantantic poem 10from me and 10 for the memmories cheers sylvia
Twenty three years old before you got a girl to cop a feel. No wonder you are so screwed up.