MG (N/A / Sydney, Nova Scotia)

(690) In The Beginning

In the beginning

In the beginning,
there was you and I.
We sat together, under
the clear, blue sky.
You gave me that special
soft touch.
I knew you loved me
so very much.
Now, I’m getting older,
not so pretty to look
at. You toss me aside
and forget, I was your
Sunday best,
Written: Aug./2006

by Melvina Germain

Comments (6)

fantastic poem. A great read. Thanks for sharing this poem. Loved the way it ends, so sudden.
beautiful lines, your earlier work is much much more refreshing :)
this had a nice twist to it.... i like!
Say, what an unsuspected twist at the conclusion. The approach is one of a delicate hand and sweet heart at play. Warmest regards, Greg
this was fun but even with the surprise of the hat, still somehow a little sad. -Tailor
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