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793. Tug Of War 211208
RS (22-May-1969 / Coimbatore, Tamil Nadu, India)

793. Tug Of War 211208

Poem By Raman Savithiri

As earth turns towards the Sun
The ups and downs are well seen
When night falls with null Moon
Dark hides the true sight soon.

As mind awakens to sensible logic
The do-s and don’t-s appear realistic
When desire rises with heart’s panic
Ignorance overrides brains as magic!

The Self patiently pulls me inside
The self hastily pushes me outside
As Earth is bound to day and night
I am tossed amid self and Self might! 211208

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Well crafted and wonderful write! !
nice theme..a self conflict with alternative solutions..good write...10
a war within- true read my me & me..thanks for sharing-10


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