CD (May 9,1984 / USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI))

♥ 03/04/2008 B Crying Because I Love ♥

When we are over were not over I'll be your friend,
Sorry that our passionate love didn't last till the end,
I still love you so very much this is so true,
I could have spent every moment of my life with you.

I imagined my self having your child,
A precious little baby that looked up and smiled.
To live our lifes till death did us part,
But it won't happen doomed from the start.

It hurts that I know this chapter of us will close,
I hate to say it but we weren't meant for each other, I suppose.
The pain that I feel the tears brought by you,
Your lies broke me down, lies more than a few.

I gave you so many chances and so much time,
My tears falling writing - typing every line!
I will always love you and if you ever need me I'll be there,
What I had with you no one could compare.

March 2008 - (Dedicated to Vernon Burchett)

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Comments (14)

awesome..lovely and professinally written piece.great task...10/10
As a reader i can hear the poet's heart cry. Very nice.
Sweet and sad, Coreena. A wonderful poignant read.
Coreena, I know this pain very well.....another beautiful poem.....sad but very beautiful. Thank you!
yet poignant love as when wistful lost to plume by the reeks of rankling as reasons to reason by the hearts when hold as love when tweaked being rilled upon.............most painful sorrow on the other side...........well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing
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