DB (20.02.1988 / Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK)

99.9%

Your mind thinks as it should,
And your mouth says as it should.
The words are right, your eyes are bright,
And there’s a smile across your face.
But your heart is absent; in a different place.

by Dan Brown

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Comments (4)

liked it...but the heart counts for more than 0.1%, doesn't it?
Well-written, thought provoking short poem.
It's a bit simple which can be a good thing, sometimes. Reading it, I thought it was missing something, though. Not sure what. All in all not a bad poem.
I loved it! Good work, Dan! 9 from me