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(a) 47 (Love/Passion) Beware, My Love...

(a) 47 (Love/Passion) Beware, My Love...

Beware, my Love
Of the thunder
That we will encounter
When we touch

Beware, my love
Of the Rain
The outpourings of the pain
For the lost time

Beware, my love
Of the lightning
The resurrection that it will bring
Of our dormant desires

Beware, my Love
Of the flood
The mingling of our blood
When our skins dissolve

Beware, my Love
Of the reverbration
The resounding celebration
Of Our eternal Embrace

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Comments (7)

electric dreams........loved it..............
This one's very skillful in rhyme and meter, as well as in thematic development and substance. I suspect you didn't start writing yesterday! I may be too fastidious, but I don't get the 'beware' in the very last stanza. (though you may have reasons, and I should perhaps realize them. Because we all fear the lack of conflict and limitation?)
Oooooohhhhhh! There's electricity in these (perfectly expressed) words.... t x
Beautifully expressed piece TO. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, a clever write and excellently thought out. Applause! ! ! ! ! ! Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Lots of depth to this work, T.O.>>>TIGHT, CRISP STRYCTURING HAS BEEN A COMMONPLACE FOR YOUR ARTISTRY & THIS PIECE IS OF NO EXCEPTION! sOLID wORK, MY DEAR... fRANK
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