Hello

Hello

Hello my dear friends
The skunk, raccoons and squirrel
This letter is open.

Sports shorts on
I hold keys in right hand
And a napkin in the left
Inside it I have a gift
The skin and a pit
Of the mango
For you
If thrown in the trash I'd feel shame
And it would make no difference
Unless and except; anyway
You would tear the bag and make a mess.

For you this is in the memory of my friend
Daniel
Whose father and whose son were Daniel

With them I ate Mango
Tons in Santa Cruz
They were great.

There I saw none of you
My Canadian friends
Therefore I share with you
This imported tasty gift.

Enjoy it and in the morning
I will check on you and
Will feel great if eaten
And act as dog walker
If not
I will remove the shit…

Once again
Hello my friends
Be kind to each other
And enjoy it; share
I think it's delicate!

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Comments (7)

electric dreams........loved it..............
This one's very skillful in rhyme and meter, as well as in thematic development and substance. I suspect you didn't start writing yesterday! I may be too fastidious, but I don't get the 'beware' in the very last stanza. (though you may have reasons, and I should perhaps realize them. Because we all fear the lack of conflict and limitation?)
Oooooohhhhhh! There's electricity in these (perfectly expressed) words.... t x
Beautifully expressed piece TO. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, a clever write and excellently thought out. Applause! ! ! ! ! ! Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Lots of depth to this work, T.O.>>>TIGHT, CRISP STRYCTURING HAS BEEN A COMMONPLACE FOR YOUR ARTISTRY & THIS PIECE IS OF NO EXCEPTION! sOLID wORK, MY DEAR... fRANK
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