(a) 49 (Love/Passion) This Is Crazy

A shadow with me all day
No body
This is crazy, this is crazy

by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean Click to read full poem

Comments (13)

Can I use this in a book im writing?
Wow I just love the repetitiveness in each verse..it pulled everything together so nicely.You hold so much talent for keeping the reader interested and for that I thank you...and your topics are usually always relateable which is another plus. Very profound thinking expressed in this one and just a all round Excellent poem! Take care of U =Shelley= 10/10!
Wow I just love the repetitiveness in each verse..it pulled everything together so nicely.You hold so much talent for keeping the reader interested and for that I thank you...and your topics are usually always relateable which is another plus. Very profound thinking expressed in this one and just a all round Excellent poem! Take care of U =Shelley=
Crazy, maybe, but very sanely and artistically expressed. A pleasing mix of a dream-like hallucination and thoughtful philosophy. You express the intangible with great clarity. love, Allie xxxx
Excellent poem Tranquil, with great emotion.
wow... people from this site are deep... well, what am i to expect... people here are poets, , , nice poem though!
Agree with everyone else. Surrealistic or out of body experience nicely conveyed and we all had similar experiences. Excellent write
To dream is to subconsciencly voice whether crazed or sanity, , , , , loved this read, , , ,
A difficult decision of balance there TO, but crazy or not, a good piece. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
The serenity and beauty and passion...I LOVE IT! , REALLY! Love duncan X
A modern slant on 'A DREAM WITHIN A DREAM', perhaps? ...Excellent slice of surrealistical verse, young lady....you are playing on my every weakness...Dreams...The Mind & The Darkside...all my favourite topics of lit.. & research...Great work, T.O. F.J.R.
Sometimes it's difficult to separate dream from reality. After all, we do create them both, only on different levels of thought. Been there, done that - totally know what you mean! Great little piece, TO. Linda :)
I know exactly what you mean. (The mark of a good poem, to have readers entirely relate?) Fine line between craziness and sanity. Katie Meluah (? spelling) 'this is the closest thing to crazy I have ever been....'. (Might be misquoting) . Yep. t x