A Beautiful Day With My Love......

When the sun rise in the morning
then you shine like a brighten lady
When the moon set in the evening
then you look like a beautiful lady
When I go to bed in the night
then you twinkle like stars
When the cool breeze touches me
then I take care of your love
When you are under my arms
then I tell you how much I love you
When I say my night prayers
then I thank God for giving you to me
When I close my eyes to sleep
then you rest your head on my chest
and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.

by Ravi Sathasivam

Comments (19)

A beautiful description of love.
Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing
A truly enjoyed piece of poetry. Lose yourself in love. I appreciate this lovely and romantic write. Truly enjoyable.
‘When I close my eyes to sleep then you rest your head on my chest and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.’…such state is called beyond oneself and in/ within herself/himself…soused in emotive elements…you carried me farthest far…by your poetry…I envy your Lady Luck…being a lady for getting such a passionate beau…lolol …. thanks sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
that is so beautiful....
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