A Beautiful Day With My Love......

When the sun rise in the morning
then you shine like a brighten lady
When the moon set in the evening
then you look like a beautiful lady

by Ravi Sathasivam Click to read full poem

Comments (19)

A beautiful description of love.
Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing
A truly enjoyed piece of poetry. Lose yourself in love. I appreciate this lovely and romantic write. Truly enjoyable.
‘When I close my eyes to sleep then you rest your head on my chest and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.’…such state is called beyond oneself and in/ within herself/himself…soused in emotive elements…you carried me farthest far…by your poetry…I envy your Lady Luck…being a lady for getting such a passionate beau…lolol …. thanks sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
that is so beautiful....
Yes indeed very nice.... Well crafted
Your soft thoughts and whispering dreams are well contained in this beautifully expressive poem. Many thanks, mandara
When the cool breeze touches.....YOU TAKE CARE OF YOUR LOVE! ! ! How magnificent a love poem can be! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I'm speechless.......So I'm writing.... Very very romantic n beautiful.....Well done.
then I thank God for giving you to me When I close my eyes to sleep then you rest your head on my chest and listen to my heart beat says you are mine...these are romantic andmemorable moments one enjoys inthe life.. i loved the weaving inwords....10 read mine indreverse way...divorce...no separate ways... homebound... come home
Very romantic! ! ! I enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing, and for your comments as well. Keep it up! God bless you! -Pink Butterfly-
wonderful lyric poem, lovely to read.......................10
'When I close my eyes to sleep then you rest your head on my chest and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.' Cute lovely love poem. As if a dream!
contentment in life is in the arms of lovers..beautiful poem, expressing love..grace
oh! wonderfull and happy family life.beautifully expressed.posted 10 surya
I agree with simple yet so meaningful.
a very simple and cute love poem, , ,
simple yet meaningful... i like this poem. best regards, joan d.h.
Azhagane oru kavithai. wonderful.
Very nice in its simplicity. H