A Bed Of Thorn

Poem By Asif Andalib

Baby my life is like a bed of thorn
If I had a choice I would not be born.

Oh my love is like a bad heartache
It reminds me always what I lack.

Oh my eyes are like thirsty sand
No one gives me her tender hand.

Oh my nights are full of sleeplessness
Cause my everything is in a mess.

Comments about A Bed Of Thorn

Shows the ultimate frustration of the poet. Beautiful lines explaining the state of mind.
A beautiful poem that echoes loneliness of the heart. A great piece and rhyme.
a beautiful written piece. thanks for sharing
A brilliant piece of poetry! Fabulous use of simile! I vote this beautiful poem with a 10
Such a wonderful poem /


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