JC (4/10/91 / modesto california)

A Better Tomorrow

iam prayen for a better tomorrow
a tomorrow with out sorrow
a day wth out pain
i would be willing to pay

but the price is life
knowing this makes me think twice

i pray for a day without sorrow
hopefully god will give it to me tomorrow

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Comments (10)

wow, very deep, & its totally true tht the price is life!
hey good job man, I like the sense of hope it's not all despair very very good
.....and we're talking about my writing? 1. this is good. 2. almost like mine in a way, which i thought you dissed....? ? : ( 3. this is wayy good. there is nothing wrong with wanting something more. xx millie xx
i think this is great. i wish i had a better tomorrow to. Johnny...u have true talent..keep writing
A few words that holds much depth... well done
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