SC (14th September,1971 / Dhaka, Bangladesh)

A Breaking Time

May be
It was a breaking time
That broke my
May be also
The zest for living...............

Life only shows
A bleeding heart
That causes nothing
But pain and suffering........

by Seema Chowdhury

Comments (6)

its only the breaking times, that takes us to a point where we can be strong or weak, sensitive or stone.... punish world or take extra of things at hand, so i am curious what have you opted for.
Life is is full of breaking times, and overshadowed by the binding times :)
Hi. I think you are little bit partial in defining life.If it does not provide pain and suffering, it is not life at all.I have also tried to observe it in my next poem 'what is life? 'please go through it.Moreover your style is superb and polished.I like it.
Life is a mixer of both joy and sorrow in different proportions to the individuals depending on his activities in this birth and also in the past! Let us accept both as HIS offerings to us.
Life is not always easy, we have our struggles from time to time, we can only pick up the pieces and carry on. Scott
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