A Breath Without A Life

We need to breath to live
to see the the birds to fly
To feel the wind to leave
To let our dreams go by
but when we love no more
and heart's closed its door,
We breath without a life
No joy to heal life's strife.

We need to love and care
And show the joy of life
to those who need a cheer
To those who lived in strife
To those who need a care
and thirst a love so bless
that we can share our best
and meaning of life's quest.

by MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

Comments (10)

Great truth spoken here, a broken heart could be healed by taking care of those in need. Thank you!
This piece of work is true, meaningful, believable, full of imagery, very creative indeed. Each line runs smoothly and flawless. Using simple words letting simple reader to understand what the author meant. I'll add to that: the author is talented. Well done!
Very nice and lovely poem.10 with love.
but when we love no more and heart's closed its door, We breath without a life so true... this is so good because it is so true and not everyone knows this.. its something to pass on to our kids... good job. Becca
Great Poem. Melvin your poem is as beautiful as your thought.
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