A Brief Pause On Earth
The sun sets
In reflected glances,
The wind purr's
In delicate dances-
by Smoky Hoss
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17 Oct 2013 04:11
Hello Smokey a beautiful poem and a tribute for Townes well written i love the last verse
25 Jun 2013 09:51
our stay here is simply a brief pause in time. lovely write
14 Aug 2012 07:59
Nice poem smoky. I like the similitude of Christ. Thanks. Mark Walters
09 Jul 2012 01:17
Who knows for sure-perhaps this is just a stopover.You handled a delicate subject with grace and dignity
27 Feb 2012 12:28
This blew me away, and the final lines cinched it. So lovely and dreamy..I like it much.
27 Nov 2011 09:31
The last three lines make a fine short poem just by themselves! - I like the ideas you are sharing with us here.
29 Sep 2011 11:10
One of the fine poems is this, , , really enjoyed your poem...let's hope to meet at the other shore..
28 Sep 2011 07:50
Now this is poetry Smoky. I enjoy reading this one a lot. You certainly demonstrate the power and the depth inside that poet heart of yours with this beauty. I must get over here far more often.... You are on my favorites list for sure. Jim Troy
26 Sep 2011 07:07
amen brother... he waits for you on the other shore!