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One sweltering day,
Wind howls, trees fall; it rains
White pellets- Hail, storm!

by Mamta Agarwal

Comments (10)

One sweltering day, Wind howls, trees fall; it rains White pellets- Hail, storm! awesome 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Love to hear raindrops and see hail pelting the windowglass. The drama is pleasing. If the storm is not too severe. Very vivid, Mamta. Warm regards, Sandra
storm of words spinning in haiku form..........10
Felt the 'Thirst' And the 'Drink' too. Cute and sweet.
Imaginative haiku piece, Mamta...thanks
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