A Busy Street

Shameless, nude always invites
To outrage her modesty,
Smooth and grey
who would not be

by Mohammad Akmal Nazir Click to read full poem

Comments about A Busy Street

Dr Pintu Mahakul 03 Nov 2014 06:18
Welcomes each old and new visitors, very beautiful observation about busy street. Excellent work.
Len Webster 11 Aug 2014 09:50
An interesting poem making good use of language. (Unsure about the droning, computerised reading that's on offer, though! It's not the fault of the writer, of course, but it certainly doesn't do his work justice..
Dickens Joseph Sawo 08 Jan 2012 06:21
i love the imagery and simile in the poem, it is a very inspirational poem when it comes to richness of symbolism.great poem
Tommy Laster 15 Aug 2011 01:46
It Could Be That Of, I Mean It has A Nice Story Behind It, People Can Take The Coldness emotion's of any woman & Blame Guilty On Her So She Feels Guilty, But In My Eyes It Is Wrong To Blame Everything On A Woman As It Is A Woman Blameing Everything On A Man, I Truly Like The Story & Message Behind It, U Are A Top A Writer(Nice Work Mohammad Akmal Nazir)
Hilton Ball 22 Jul 2011 09:51
nicely done good source of imagery and emotion used i like it
Shannon Hogan 21 Jul 2011 11:10
wow... you definately have a creative way of capturing the mind of the reader through the similies and methaphors. I love how you gave lust and prostitution a face
Kamini Arichandran 17 Jul 2011 04:13
'Yet always ready for retribution, Like a great saint who never minds to take The burden of their sin'...Very Profound! 10+++
Anthony Joseph Erangey 15 Jul 2011 11:23
This poem displays a very keen observant mind. It displays a compassionate understanding that can only come from respect. I applaud this work.10
Anthony Joseph Erangey 15 Jul 2011 11:14
I feel the compassion oozing out of these lines. Loved it. A lesson in observation. Beautiful.
Abhay Vignesh L 15 Jul 2011 10:32
Blatant yet powerful...reminds of kamala das.......worthy to inspire the masses and the erudite....Keep up the good work sir...10++
C. Edgar Nolan 15 Jul 2011 12:30
Nicely done, a bit erratic - intentionally so I imagine. Good job.
Stefanie Fontker 15 Jul 2011 09:18
Great poem, beautiful words. I like how abstract it is.
Ron Pate 14 Jul 2011 03:57
Beautifull done, it's a living piece of art..
Amanda Purificato 08 Jul 2011 01:23
I loved the meaning of this poem. It was nicely put great job (: &thanks for rateing my poem
Anil Kumar Panda 08 Jul 2011 12:05
this is wonderful ink.the meaning is crystal clear.liked it.
Miki22 Smith 07 Jul 2011 11:48
I can't really comprehend what the plot of this poem, but it was ok, I guess.
Prarthana Ranjit 06 Jul 2011 07:29
it's very strong and expressive. thanks for sharing! & thanks for reading 'the late night love city' :)
Mohammed Albalushi 03 Jul 2011 11:34
very expressive, describe the situation in all bases, well done and thanks 4 sharing
Robert Melliard 03 Jul 2011 10:09
This is a powerful poem, though perhaps a little too abstract for me at some points. I like the comparison to a harlot.
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 Jul 2011 01:16
 From: Isaac Ziv (United States ;)  To: Mohd. Akmal Nazir  Date Time: 7/2/2011 12: 42: 00 AM (GMT-6: 00)  Subject: A busy street hi, Thank you for your encouraging words... 'A busy street' is it written on a real character? ? ? The writing is nice and veryexpressive....just my concern is that women may not like it.