# A Captivated Audience...
The sombre glacier breaks
Eons of its icy silence
As a water fall,
by Mamta Agarwal
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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath
29 Apr 2018 12:37
Tears expresses the state of mind. Beautiful expression of feelings.
02 Aug 2009 02:35
again, the last stanza has remainded me a play which written based on guruji tagore's a short story, where the main charecter young nature lover tenderly touch flowers and their leaves and become tearful! ! You great indeed Mamtaji!
20 Jul 2009 09:48
10000000+ 'From the deep crevice In the mountain, it descends Like a torrent… The language it speaks Can not be matched By any human speech…' very pellucid picto........a deep look at the facts....... ammmmazing wording that imprinted.... really great! !
Sathyanarayana M V S
17 Feb 2009 10:52
Ecstacy! ! ! ! ! ! Tears of happiness! ! ! ! That was the great bliss you felt of Nature.......Vivid portrayal with apt and rather stunning end.
Pink Butterfly ...
02 Feb 2009 04:15
Great write! Such an adorable piece!
31 Jan 2009 11:02
wow...beautiful, beautiful...its a very strong and marvellous write ma'am, very smooth and the words which can be felt, the whole poem is great but i loved these lines most...... 'From east the Sun’s rays Have come down to play, The game of hide and seek…' bravo, bravo...a humble 10+++ for this marvellos piece... rgds asif
31 Jan 2009 10:03
A very beautiful poem ingrained with elegance of natural scenic that really is worth reading in the form of good imageries and metaphors..........There comes a state on our mind in life when we observe things and conclude different things for better enhancements and steps............especially the first stanza really depicts your deep complete imagination about the natural scenics that seems to lie in your soul too...........absolute 10 Best Regards Sameer
30 Jan 2009 09:35
This journey from Glacier to Vantage Point Brought tears of fulfillment into my eyes A perfect picture in a wall hangging Dear poet, we are with you to shed tears. A deep look into Nature's eyes Sure to bring tears from within. A serene experience shared with all of us. Enjoyed to the brim. Thank you.
29 Jan 2009 01:22
beautiful imagery I see Eden at play- nice work Mamta ++++++10 anjali
28 Jan 2009 11:00
lovely..you got along with the nature...read my poem 'the user'....similar
22 Jan 2009 07:44
exquisite poetry wonderful imagery A++ anjali
22 Jan 2009 04:32
tears...in which language do they speak?
21 Jan 2009 11:11
Wonderful expressions of beauty provided to us by nature can be captivating indeed, as is this beautiful write. Well done, poet friend. Richard
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
21 Jan 2009 05:10
And an Audience you shall capture, with this pioctorial penning grandeur, that is as smooth, as it is sweet....and welllll..............C A P T I V A T I N G! ! ! F j R 2009
21 Jan 2009 06:49
This is an ode to nature and the serenity it brings, , very very true to nature write and honest feelings comming in tears, , ,
21 Jan 2009 04:40
tears...why? yes...as you very eloquently put...'The language it speaks can not be matched by any human speech'…beautiful piece, Mamta..thanks for sharing...10
20 Jan 2009 02:37
A true beautiful poem with a very refined theme of Nature's power to activate ones innerself with emotions popping-up in the form of tears. The scenery you have described really grabs the readers attention and ones memories are easily evoked.10/10.............Best Wishes..........Sameer
20 Jan 2009 10:43
You write so beautifully Mamta, I am going to try to read all your poems. This shows how magnificent the wonders of nature are, being brought to tears by the sheer beauty shows your caring nature, thanks for this. 10 Lynda xxx
20 Jan 2009 08:10
There is nothing more beautiful than what Mother Nature provides and you captured it perfectly in your elequent style, Mamta. Lovely! A '10+! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
Naseer Ahmed Nasir
20 Jan 2009 02:46
It is so beautiful poem that I cannot express in words. Nature's divine inspiration and attraction is so strong that it has brought out from your heart all nostalgia, memories of someone and days bygone, sadness, thoughts and fears and transform all this into tears and poetry. You made me sad as well, Mamta......10/10. Regards Naseer
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