KL (unknown / the womb)

A Choice

Getting a woman to...
Opening up her...
Love gates...

Is a trip worth tripping over...
Smiles a plenty...
Do you or do you not...
Get any...

Hold up...partner...
That, there phiilly is a Queen...
Many of a man's dream...

Take your time...
Go slow...
Whats inside...

She only know...
stand back cowboy...
Bark...scream...

So you can't cream...

Be wise...
Let her regulate her...prize...
You can tell...
By the look in her eyes...

Remembering...ah...smiles...

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Comments (4)

Be wise... Let her regulate her...prize... You can tell... By the look in her eyes..... so nice and appealing poem....10 be wise and nice, give a word of promise that she is only one wanted at all the time and none else....
In the paradigmatic axis of this poem we can understand the meaning of its metaphors as well as we can find new meanings in its sinthagmatic axis, which can assert but cannot impose the truth. It is an excellent symbolistic poem trying to reveal to us its most subtle confines and its regalian power of witticism by which the order is annihilated in an instant for symbolizing the truth that has not said its last word. Excellent poem..........10+++++++++
Be wise... Let her regulate her...prize... You can tell... By the look in her eyes... Remembering...ah...smiles......world canbewon over by simple smiles... let her know about your sincere wish and world is at foot steps... lovely write i enjoyed it so much.. beautiful write with so nice words....10 read mine mary to marry......cry not... a place callled home
Heh heh! ! 1 this is a good one... Very enjoyable read.. loved reading this one.. I found this rather entertaining.. cheers shan