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A Collapsed House Rebuilt

A Collapsed House Rebuilt

In that top corner of the house
A cobweb swaying in breeze
What made the breeze become the wind
A foul play..it blew butting blind
Chasing the wind now cobweb in a play
It's His mercy the spider back on way
Behold, he is weaving again his house

Note:Thank you PoemHunter for selecting my poem 'A Collapsed House Rebuilt' for the Poem Of The Day..thanks a lot for this honour

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Comments (26)

Nicely symbolic. Good use of metaphor 10+
A marvelous work dear mam. I adore this poem. thank you for sharing....10+++++++ (Magadha)
A great poem dear madam! I derive enormous pleasure in reading this fabulous piece of poetry again and again. ToMyPoemList
A brilliant piece that pack a punch that can knock the heart into a leap.Thanks for sharing
A great iinspirational poem emphasizing the importance of hard work and consistency. Heartiest congrats on poem of the day.
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