MS (8.4.1929 / Marton, Lancashire)

Learn How To Speak

I saw my friend with his new hair cut
Did you cut your hair?
No, someone did for me
I laugh when i remember
my stupid question
I feel afraid to made mistake
Because my English is not good

But then, my friend told me
If you always afraid to speak
then, you never know you are good or not
First, i denied it....
I feel ashamed to made any mistake
But then i encourage my self
Eventhough, many people laughts at me
Well, please i learn it to be better
Life also like that
We should try first no matter is wrong
But with good intention
Lord will help us to find the truth

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Comments (4)

A witty construction, Michael.
This was a very inTENseful siteation(said or pronounced as Jethro Bodine-Beverly Hill Billies tv fame) going on. Isn't that carrying the sports FANATICAL ways too far. So what if his opponent called his mother a few choiced four letter words. If he's a mama's boy, he needs to see a shrink. I don't think any son should be MOMMY WHIPPED. Be a man and cut that over protective UMBRELLICA CORD.(that' a whole other poem, by itself) . Good poem showing a disasterouse ending. God bless-Michael Jeffrey Gale.
BUT YOU KNEW THE TITLE ALONE WOULD REEL THEM IN FOR DINNER, MICHAEL... OF COURSE I DON'T THINK YOU LEFT ANYONE FEELING SHORT-CHANGED WHEN YOU SERVED THE DESERT, QUITE A COLORFUL DISPLAY IN FACT....YOU'RE MY LAST READ FOR THE MORNING...THANX FOR ALLOWING IT TO BE ON A HIGH NOTE...FRANK
Succinct and high-impact. How was it last night, Mikey? And can you help me back into this world (you know, creating lines that move, probe, and/or amuse those who come across them) ? Love, Gina.