A Confession

Poem By Mohammad Akmal Nazir

You have gone away from my life
But you still inhabit in my heart
When I try to forget you,
I remember you most.

Comments about A Confession

Been there - know how it feels. In one little verse you captured the pain of lost love - nice job! !
How true to our nature, the things most lost are the ones we think of the most. and when we try to forget, we cannot, , simply put, but complicated we are, ! ! ! A good write of an age old dilemmer
Wow. So succinct and so perfectly stated! Why is it that when we are trying to escape in forgetting we are sometimes most tormented?
Like I said in my poem titled: MY CONFESSION, I am afraid to fall asleep because I will dream about you but if I stay fully awake I know for sure I am going to think about you! A well penned and poignant write! I love it! Love and Peace for always! ...
Yes that is the way, great loves whether they be women or loved ones always will have a place in our hearts. Short and sweet, very good poem, great words.


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