A Daughters Promise

I can't sleep. I'm in too deep thinking about life and how I feel incomplete, my fathers passing was tragic and now he is at peace. It opened up my eyes on how life can be. He was a blessing in my life and now I really can see, that loss is a gain of experience to me, to take care of what matters first in life is a priority to make things right in the oblivious eye. I had writers block for some time and now i'm opening myself in these lines, is a blessing in disguise. Dad I will make things right. I see a new light of profound in my life. I will make you proud and that's a promise.

R.I.P Dad

by Ana Sanchez

Comments (3)

Please accept my deepest condolences for your father's loss. I know, mere words can never express what you really feel... May god bless him with heavenly peace. You have truly said, loss is a gain of experience''...
Wow! Great poetry, Ana Sanchez. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
He was a blessing in my life and now I really can see, that loss is a gain of experience to me, to take care of what matters first in life is a priority to make things right in the oblivious eye. Dad i will make things right in my life....... dont worry....... you sad demise is shaking me........ thank u for this poem at the loss of your father. tony