MA (March 27,1951 / India)

Haiku (Continuation)

Sunset stains the sky
and birds roost. Go Down Under.
Hear the dawn chorus.

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a day in a hospital ward seems like an eternity, time freezes when one is sick.well done i enjoyed the poem.
A lovely poem rains hope on the droughts we face...thanks
It seems to be very hard to spend a lonely day anywhere but don't forget, that makes you feel what you can feel when you are with the people. You felt happy in the end of the poem. You recognized the reality when you were alon isn't. That's great. When we are alone the best it is for us to enjoy.
The simplicity of words and thoughts are highlights of this poem. very heart warming. sathyanarayana
Mamta, unfortunately, i know that feeling all too well, and your vivid depiction of that scenario brought back my many experiences as a patient in a Hospital....all of which, thankfully, concluded, just as this fine work of yours does...smooth & successfully! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
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