A Day Of Spring

Poem By Asif Andalib

On this day of spring
Wind is filled with flower's smell
And the cuckoos sing!

Comments about A Day Of Spring

my favorite poems are short and to the point. nicely penned
A beautiful spring hauiku of perfection. Enjoyed.
I can't really explain why, but i like this haiku. most haikus are like that i guess. i occassionally write what Kerouac called American Haiku - same concept, but it doesn't have to follow the 5-7-5 rule. as long as it says something profound or a unique observation in 3 short lines. well done here. -R-
Asif, you write these brief, sharp pictures excelently.
From what I've heard about springs, UI'd say it is an admirable season. You are indeed a good writer of Haiku, it's good to find someone else that takes so much pride in writing it. Well done.


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