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A Death Blow Is A Life Blow To Some
JTC (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

A Death Blow Is A Life Blow To Some

Poem By john tiong chunghoo

a death blow is a life blow to many
whose world is a caged dream
a bird crying to do what other birds do
eating, mating, flying to the ends of the world
a death blow is a life blow to many
who live in other people's world
sharing its glory, except its happiness
a death blow is a life blow to
others in the same mould

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'a death blow is a life blow to...'great poem.a great blow to poetry! ! it's just FANTASTIC! ! !
i really do not get this it sound great but i can not picture it as i only picture it to understand it.i find some words and sentence really good.i read a few and they are good and you are a great poet don't fell upset by what i said if you are i am sorry. kelly
Great stuff! I like how you've crafted this poem into being totally yours. I think it ends very well, 'a death blow is a life blow to others in the same mould'. Well done. All the best, Seán


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