A Demanding Woman

Poem By Velvet Thorn

A challenge was offered
A task of love
An exposure of self.
You accepted.

With staggering ease and grace
The vessel was filled
With images of beauty
And song.

However,
Unlike athletes of Olympus
You're not allowed to rest
On your laurels.

Comments about A Demanding Woman

agree with Sherrie, this is tres good.
Ahhhh....a poem about moi? ! This is fabulous, Velvet! Truly fabulous.


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