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A Failure In Love
Mohammad Muzzammil (2nd July,1986 / Bahraich, India)

A Failure In Love

Oh, how sever the heart's pain,
In the love, did what I gain,
Writhing my heart and eyes rain,
I forget her, but in my dreams remain.

First awoke my sleeping emotions,
Promised with me to stay lifelong,
Her lovely eyes made in me commotions,
And sang to me a false love song.

Likely she loved me as showed her gesture,
So, I proposed and gave her gifts and rose,
But, her return taught me a lesson for future,
Cause I was given only tears and pathos.

Ruined me her coral lips and rosy cheek,
I sacrificed my everything and too, myself,
In a diana a tender heart I tried to seek,
But, given me faithlessness by my elf.

Lament! For her I lost my delights,
And like blind believed did what she speak,
I missed her badly all days and nights,
But, she pushed in ditch from the love-peak.

~20-08-07

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Comments (10)

Likely she loved me as showed her gesture, So, I proposed and gave her gifts and rose, But, her return taught me a lesson for future, Cause I was given only tears and pathos...// wow beautifully penned
a failure in love, but there will be many more in the future. nicely written with a touch of sadness
true feeling in your words....
gee! what a nice poem. it makes me remember my past. thanks for sharing this. i thought im the only one who has this kind of past
While I was looking at your list of peoms I noticed 'A failure in love' right away. I am in a similar situation and I found myself in the poem. You wrote just how I feel and I believe half of the world feels as love comes and go, sometimes we don't appreciate true love enough, and false loves leave us broken... leave biggest stamp in our souls and that's when the greatest poems begin!
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