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A Fair World.
AW (7/09/1940 / Hong Kong)

A Fair World.

Poem By Albert Wong

Many people are living not with good right.
Most starving hungry while the others eat and drink,
they can only earn a poor rate of labor;
while some the others earn to rich and richer.

Is it fair for every body which lives in the world?
Have you thought about the other's difficulties?
You won't be happy if you or families are in bad stage.
Wishing every body would think about the others;
A rest good and fair would be exciting in the world.

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'Is it fair for every body which lives in the world? Have you thought about the other's difficulties? ' Nice job is done.
This is my favurite subject. Very well expressed.9 sathya
I cannot recommend this writing because there is not much here to distonguish this piece. It calls for a wonderful thing but it does not do so in an interesting way for the reader. There is a very great line in this. 'A rest good and fair.' I wish that this line had been repeated two or three times and that it even had been the title of this piece. Thay would have made all the difference in the world. GW62


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