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My Life
(06.08 1983 r. / Gdynia)

My Life

There she was, my life.
My living heart, my vivid soul!
Loved her, kissed her, missed her,
Each moment and every tomorrow.
My shaking fingers wiped the tears
From her dreamy eyes,
Every time they dropped,
Like pearls of sorrow,
And how I leaped in jubilation
Glancing at her rosy glow,
Full of heartfelt laughter,
Diving in intense passion,
As gaiety and romance swept me all over,
Hitting with the cupid's arrow,
And immersing myself in her flying kisses
Whispering her name in the bright sunny days,
Embracing her softly in the misty mornings,
Hugging her tight in the lovely rains!

And as I saw her,
Lying down with crimson roses all over,
Eyes closed with a hint of rift,
Causing deadly pain in my broken mind,
Could not wipe the small droplets of water
Rolling down my dry cheeks,
As my life was on her way
To begin her solitary journey
Leaving a barren heart
And a half burnt candle behind!

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

User Rating: 4,9 / 5 ( 8 votes ) 3

Comments (3)

you are afraid and are shivering you are freezing to the spot it is only waiting for it is goggling large eyes is clenching the throat is growing the selection of words and the way of expression is perfect and the rhythmic way of writing shows that, you know the baseics of poetry to make.. i enjoyedit and let me say, you are really a good poem with sweet andmeaninful thought...appreciate you..
Fluent, beautiful, well penned.10.
Very good poem. With pleasure I am giving 10 v. :)