A Fleeting Thought

Poem By Chuck Audette

I watched the days
and time
fly by

Sparrows -
their songs too brief

Comments about A Fleeting Thought

Well conceived and nicely encapsulated with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing, Chuck.
A fleeting thought, perhaps, but the one that most definitely lingers....less is more and every single word here counts. Lovely Chuck...
Days move in ages, and time in moments; sparrows live many days, but a song is gone in a moment of wonder. BEAUTIFUL poem Chuck.
This little gem is brief, but rich and enduring.
Your touch is as light as a feather here...well done.

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