A Ghazal - He And We

Poem By Sunil Uniyal

wind water earth sky - all things remain the same
for our Lord in heaven above we are but a game

He tests us at every step if we fail
not He but we're ourselves to blame

all day the devotees throng His shrine
chanting His name spreading His fame

desires they've sown for ages in their hearts
if they don't sprout won't it be His shame?

deaf He may be to my pleas, uni,
don't think on His love i'll forego my claim.

Comments about A Ghazal - He And We

The style of expression of faith in God and closeness with Him is superb. A well deserved modern poem of the day.
What a great message in poetic form. It's great to know you recognize the power of our Father. Congratulations on POD,
Congrats Uni for being featured in the POD
In a Ghazal themes are usually connected to love and romance. This beautiful Ghazal misses that romance, no? Please, never create such a line, making God as evillish, I cite you here: " for our Lord in heaven above we are but a game" , I do not think so, Sunil Sir. CONGRATULATIONS, Sunil Sir, being chosen as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Hurray! Double Congrats, previous year the same honour, prize and even the date. God´s Blessings.
all day the devotees throng His shrine chanting His name spreading His fame desires they've sown for ages in their hearts if they don't sprout won't it be His shame? /// Ghazal in shekwa tone


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