A Ghazal - I Feel Lost

Poem By Sunil Uniyal

I don't know why, it's strange but true-
I feel lost in front of you

Virtues in me are too many,
You take only a bird's eye-view.

What is all this roaming about?
Why is life a wandering Jew?

In this world of tasks undone,
Days are like the morning dew.

Here's a city of millions where,
Uni's been seeking friends few.

Comments about A Ghazal - I Feel Lost

I don't know why, it's strange but true- I feel lost in front of you Virtues in me are too many, You take only a bird's eye-view. All credit to you for such a wonderful poem. Writing Ghazals in English is not an easy task but you have nicely maintained the elegance of this form in your poetry. Thanks for sharing.
very very neat indeed
a nice rhyme indeed................
Good piece of work with rhymes and rhythm


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