When I Die (Hyperbole Poem)

When I die I will be a ghost
and discover the world's secrets.

When I die and become a ghost
I will return to my body and live.

When I die I will be on earth
and choose to be in heaven.

When I die and I have revenge
I will live to seek it.

When I die
I will live.

by Sonia H.

Comments (8)

Yes Sir… Yes Sir… Yes Sir… I’m a soldier …destined for country …and also citizen … A fighter …for the country… 10/10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
To be ultermost sincere, it is a great poem of appriciation.
A intolerable pain marched into heart. This should be dedicated to all soldiers who kissed their eternity in some cause during the wars that world tasted. Impressive poem
As bible says LOVE is patient and kind and let that faith surround you. You are a great soldier for the all time and yet to be seen....means pioneer position even in Holdy book and their destination is to be seen heven i.e. martyrdom...... beautiful write... Read mine 'Martyres'
Hello sir, 'As bible says LOVE is patient and kind and let that faith surround you. You are a great soldier for the all time and yet to be seen' see sir..you know what is the best weapon for a soldier...is it AK47...Dragnov or Hand Grande....no sir...soldiers best weapon is love...... and that's what i ment/// and i feel you v bought it out perfectly...this is a great tribute a great soldier indeed... god bless him regards with love shan
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